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Long time ago, in a time where mythical beings lived a land called "Divine Paradises", where all mythical beings were born. The land is three times bigger than USA, but the land is actually a floating rock and it location is in the center of the Pacific Ocean. Most of the creatures were peacefully and don't show themselves to humans, however not all are good creature.
  One day, a greedy man, who name is a mystery, by giving him the location and a ride to the land by waiting till the moon and sun to eclipse, which fire from the eclipse to that certain location cause to open a portal in front of the stranger. When he enter and left his boat, he was surrounded with life he never seen before; the tree were 20-feets tall, most of the flowers were beautiful, but also dangerous because they were man-eater and poisons to paralyze their victims'. The ocean was wide and fills with creatures and to his surprises half-man and half-fish creatures too. As he kept walking, still focusing on the one thing he came and that was the secret 'treasure', which a voice told him about in a dream and this cause the man to be lusting for it. After he reaches to the center of the land, he came across a strange building, including a castle and next to it a tall tower that almost reaches the sky. When he enter the castle, a bright light came out of nowhere, and in the instant four great creatures appear in front of him; Leviathan, Thunder Bird, Fernier (Ice Wolf), Kistune (Nine-Tail) and a Dragon. Each one is actually female and known as the "Divine Goddess". Behind them, in a throne, was the king of the land; a warrior, who discover the land, became it ruler and became immortal. The Warrior was planning on making a peace between the humans and the creatures; however, fate has a twist with the appearance of the stranger …

The Warrior "Young man, what is your reason of coming here to disturb the land with your greed?" The Warrior said in a calm, low voice.

Stranger "I have no reason on telling you anything; all you need to know is that I want to enter the tower. So I want you to let me in the tower now or else!"

The Warrior "I am afraid that I can't just let an evil being, like you, to enter the tower." And with that, the four creatures began their attack on the stranger; but the stranger was protected by a strange barrier that causes the creatures not to penetrate through the barrier. The stranger began running through the door and began climbing up the stairs. Je finally reach at the top of the tower and open the door; there, a spirit in darkness cover in chain and hanging on the wall, had it three eyes staring at him.

??? "So you came at last!! Now, release me and I will give you the greatest treasure ever!" As the stranger get closer to the being, the Warrior appear and stab the stranger right at the back. The stranger fell to the ground, dead. But that didn't stop the spirit freedom; the spirit absorbs the dead body and the chain began to crack till the chains went to pieces. The spirit began to move and jump out the tower; the being soon began to grow to 40 feet tall and safely land on the ground. It began to change again, as it grew two arms with four claws and two legs; then it body became solid and it color change from black to grey. The beings soon became skeleton like, but then it body was cover in armor shells, spike appears on the arms and legs, a diamond shape crest appear on the chest. The neck was longer but 4-feet and the head, also cover in armor, had four large spikes; two on the right and two on the left, like a square corner's.  The being began to walk and plans on leaving the land; The Warrior began attack on the head while the four creatures transform into human-like beings to attack the arms and legs. As the battle went on, many creatures fell and landed on the human world. As the Warrior and the four goddess were losing the fight, the Warrior had a plan; The Warrior stab the diamond and destroy the being power source. The explosion blew away the Warrior and he fell right to earth hard and disappear. As the Creature try to escape, the Dragon Goddess and the other three surround him and cut his body part in five ways; right and left arms, right and left legs, and the head. With their leader gone, the five decided to make five towers in their own separate territory.  The Dragon Goddess, although she seal the head at her tower, began looking for the Warrior around the land (although she didn't see the Warrior actually off the land and fell down the human world) until she used all her power because of the battle. She was then been attack by an unknown being; she was then end up wounded and fell down to the cave. The unknown being decided not to follower her and disappear to the sky. The Divine Paradises was soon covered in a great, thick fog; never to been seen or found again. The Warrior was never found; as for the creatures that fell the land, some went hidden, while other were known by people like the Greeks, Egyptians, Africans, Japanese and other countries people. In today time, we call them "mythical creatures" and believe they don't exist, just made-up believe story tells; or is it…
This is my Reversion of my old idea story "Dragon Maiden". I decided to of not putting tg in this story. It is still romance, but with more twist in them
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shadowlord19 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Work.
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Thank you.
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ToshirotheKnightWolf Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
cool :)
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Thank you.
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:iconsavageplz: yousa welcome
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